Keiko0_0

The next chapter will take some time, because I can't figure out what to put in it. Sorry guys:v 
          	

GAME_OVER_SHIP

@Keiko0_0 it's okay take your time
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Keiko0_0

Done with the correction and rewriting.. it's still cringe because I'm to lazy to totally rewrite it, so just replaced cringe phrases with better ones and fixed my grammar.
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sososeraphic

@Keiko0_0 quick thing i noticed in your spicynoodles book, you added “ed” at the end of a few words that didn’t need  it. i’m just saying bc yk you were trying to work on grammar
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