AVITwd

Hey, love the stories and well, I am working on one twdg story as well but the interesting part is that instead of carrying on twdg, I'm writing about different people, in the same world and about their journey. I think it'd be great as fans would like to see something new and exciting and it'd vast the world as well, as twdg is quite limited for now. I don't know if you'll reply or not but... yea. Same world, new characters, different people, new challenges and the same excitement. If you want, I can send chapter 1. That's all you'd need to understand what's going on in my story and how much potential it has. It'd explain the plot, world, main character and everything. 

Guyver1407

I think you're using the pov's kind of wrong. Not trying to be mean.

Guyver1407

@KBTHMDK260 No problem. Keep up the good work
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KABELO260

@Guyver1407 I'll try. Thanks for the heads up.
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Guyver1407

@KBTHMDK260 so when you say Clem's pov you should have it be 1st person. You're using "you" like you're talking to the reader when you should have "I" and "me" because it's Clem and she's the one doing these things.
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