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@LVE_32 I'm sorry you are going through a lot. It's not that the story was bad it is just that everyone has different tastes. I will remove the story from my list for you, and I doubt anyone has seen the list since I don't  have a following nor do I publish stories. I hope you feel better and never stop writing. Just because one person doesn't particularly get drawn in doesn't mean others won't. You are very good at what you do. Have a good day. 

@JayWinston45 If you could remove it from the list that would be great, thank you. It might make people not want to read my story, and it sort of made me cry because (I know I'm over reacting) I'm going though some really tough stuff right now, and then I get a notification saying something I tried really hard on is bad. Thanks for understanding

Though I would like to add that it wasn't the way that it was written. You are a beautiful writer! The story line just wasn't for me. I have nothing against you or your books.