JSB_17

Sorry I'm not working on books. My life has been very eventful recently, and in five days I'll be a legal adult. I've said like four times that I was going to quit, but I always ended up coming back with another story. So, after I graduate, I'm not sure how active I'll be after the grand event, but if I ever end up having the impulse to write a little story, I may return. For now, I don't know if I'm going to finish Disturbed Lincoln, but hey, you never know what will happen. Even if I'm not writing, I'll probably check in once in a while. (Just get my books popular so my Lincoln-legacy lives on wink wink!)
          	
          	Thanks guys! 
          	
          	- JSB 17

JSB_17

Sorry I'm not working on books. My life has been very eventful recently, and in five days I'll be a legal adult. I've said like four times that I was going to quit, but I always ended up coming back with another story. So, after I graduate, I'm not sure how active I'll be after the grand event, but if I ever end up having the impulse to write a little story, I may return. For now, I don't know if I'm going to finish Disturbed Lincoln, but hey, you never know what will happen. Even if I'm not writing, I'll probably check in once in a while. (Just get my books popular so my Lincoln-legacy lives on wink wink!)
          
          Thanks guys! 
          
          - JSB 17

JSB_17

Here's my grand idea: A journalist who every time he's covering a case or event, they find someone personally related to the story and have them paint a picture for them. Then, in the end when they retire, they hang all the paintings  up in a public art hall with subtext under each one detailing the event and the story of the person who painted it.

quemirasbobo77

omg is vampire hunter over?
          We NEED an epilogue otherwise i can't get over the story :.)

quemirasbobo77

no problem :D
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JSB_17

@quemirasbobo77 I might string out the story a little more. I probably wouldn't have finished it—or at least the same way—without your encouraging words, so I again thank you for that ;) As for the suggestions, I will take them into consideration if I end up experimenting a bit more with the characters. I appreciate the constructive feedback!
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quemirasbobo77

@JSB_17 i'll take that for a yes :D
            i feel like there needs to be some developement regarding lincoln managing his life in the town now that litterally everyone knows he's a vampire, maybe some backstory to how he gathered the courage to hunt vampires in the first place (this one is optional, as i feel like the story is still enjoyable regardless), also a much needed arc focusing on Lincoln and Ronnie Anne's relationship because i feel like it hasn't been developed enough on Lincoln's side ( you did a good job on Ronnie's side though).
            And yeah, if you choose to continue with this AU, im sure you'll come up with a bunch of creative ideas.
            fantastic ending batte btw.
            eagerly waiting for your response, have a great rest of your day
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JSB_17

Thanks to everyone who has been very patient. I'm dealing with real-life fairly often so I find little time to wind down and write. I have not forgotten about Vampire Hunter and I still plan on finishing it. (Thank you all for the interest in my stuff.)

quemirasbobo77

@JSB_17 yey :D (take your time bro)
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JSB_17

I've begun to realize how excessively large some of my paragraphs are.

quemirasbobo77

@ JSB_17  honestly ive seen worse in this platform. Some people have a serious problem, you'd think they never heard of a periodt '.'. But it would be indeed better if you wrote smaller paragraphes and separated the dialogues a bit more.
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quemirasbobo77

hiii
          Just wanted to now if you're planning on continuing "Lincoln: vampire hunter" any soon. I think it has great potential and i enjoyed every chapter.
          Eagerly waiting for your response
          keep it up !

JSB_17

@quemirasbobo77 You too ;)
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quemirasbobo77

@JSB_17 you go, bro! Have a great rest of your day:)
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JSB_17

@quemirasbobo77 In the spur of the moment, I went ahead and finished Chapter 18. Maybe I'll kick myself into being more productive with it
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