JDKins01

Don’t worry it won’t be deleted and if I don’t finish (which I should it’s just hard to get through right now) I would post the remaining chapters for everyone to continue reading :)

I’m glad you liked it! I wasn’t expecting much people to still visit the book <3 thank you for the support

I appreciate that! If you have any ideas that you think would be good for book I’d be happy to credit you, I’ll take any advice or plot ideas anyone has to give <3

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            Thats all i have right now but if you want more or something diffrent just ask i have literally nothing else to do at this point. I also have many ideas for Natalie (if you want her in the story but dont know what to do with her. I kinda liked the fact that y/n had a 'friend' back at the Club and because she did not seem to have any Real friends outside the mansion i thought she could be far more than a character in the beginning arc.)
            
            As of now i still love your writing style and please dont abandon this book even if you take Breaks! And please take them if you feel like you need them.
            
            I am sorry also. I know you said to post this in the comments but wattpad would not let me. I have written everything in my notes so i just copy it to here and by my life, wattpqd did not allow this big paragraph being posted in the comments.
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            -Meanwhile, y/n is on her healing journey. She reconnects with her family (maybe natalie) and tries to live outside the mansion abit. Also maybe staying with her grandparents for a bit to regain some of her mental strength and sorting out her memories. Her grandparents try to make he life as comfortable as possible.
            
            -still some effects of the trauma shine through. Intensive cleaning, make-up to Cover her scars, only wearing long sleeved clothing. Maybe this should be shown subtle. (I am in no shape or form a psychiatrist but i have my fair share of trauma so i understand some of the actions i am describing here. Still everybody lives through trauma on their own and not everyone has had the same circumstances or happanings so please dont come after me:)). The subtle ways of her behaviour could not be noticable to everyone and herself atfirst and that is the scary part. It changes you without you being in control. A minor Detail changes in her surroundings and y/n has a Panik attack.
            
            -here comes Natalie into play: she gets in contact with y/n and they talk. Natalie has lived through the constant abuse far longer then y/n and could help her dealing with her situation. They meet up for Coffee and she helps getting y/n go outside more. Natalie could be a big part in y/ns healing journy. Also a big part in the story (the suggestions i made in the earlier proposal).
            
            -Through sally or y/n though the entity could grab hold of the pastas location. Even finding the weakest to use. Hoodie. Hoodie is fighting with the entity in his head, fighting over cotrol of his body. Masky will be trying to help him but it seems noone really can. Except maybe just maybe a normal mortal being called nathan (yes i like their little love story right now and i dont care what the others say hehe. So i like it dramatic who cares?). In the end nathan offers to make a Deal with the entity to save hoodie but it could cost him something?
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            -After finding y/n life settles for a tiny bit but not for long. Hoodie is getting weaker by the day and sallys sudden outburst and paranoia have made some of the pastas uneasy.
            
            -Y/n is first kept under lock and key but after a while she asks the pastas to see her family. The pastas and nathan (who has to pull some strings at the police staion) make up a plausible explanation for y/ns sudden revival.
            
            -the explanation goes as follows: she was kidnapped by a human trafficing Ring and they had a dead girl looking like y/n who they exchanged her with before she was found by the police. Jane and her cousin where in on that and helped the Ring traffik her. Y/n was then, falsly, burried.
            
            -most of the people in town bought it because of the evidence with the gentlemens Club. (You could also say that the grave robbers have unearthed the grave and they 'found' further evidence when the checked the 'body' for DNA of the robbers but they actually 'found out' that the DNA was not matching with y/ns. Also as evidence presented to the public)
            
            -slenderman on the other hand did not return to the mansion at first as he feels a known and dangerous presence near them. He is out searching for evidence of said presence. This also impacts hoodie alot.
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@MacKenzie139045 what about p3 pleaseeeee

@MacKenzie139045 sorry I did not know you made book 2

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@BuUuNnGeEeeGuUuMmMm thank you so much! And thanks for sticking alongside me!

@ JadeyKins01  sorry that I reply this late but I haven't seen your message so yeahhh... And I wanted to say that the first chapter ist already really good Your writing style is just amazing ;D

No I’m still working on it I’m afraid I’m suffering writers block but will be posting chapters soon!

@ JadeyKins01  Thank you. I just love your story and I cant wait to see it continued... my offer still stands. If you need help, you can always ask:)

@xXYuukieXx WoW! That was amazing to read! I will definitely interpret this into the story and will be happy to give you credit! You’re very talented!

@ JadeyKins01  -Keep in mind, this is just what I imagine. You could try an entirely diffrent approach. This is my opinion and my personal approach to a sequel to an amazing book i loved reading, so i took alot of time and effort in this advive(s). If you, Jadey or who ever likes what i wrote, want further help or idears to/for certain scenes, chapters, characters or entire books u could always massage me.
            [If there are any spelling errors, please forgive me><. I am from germany and the autocorrection hates english. I am very sorry that it is so long×-×) !!!THIS IS NOT MEANT TO CRITISIZE THE AUTHORS WRITING IN ANYWAY!!! sorry if it does><
            -Yuukie
            

There will be but that will be after the new current book I’ll be releasing!