JCJPINK

Hi there,  hope you are well and I am sorry to disturb but if you don't mind, could you please take a look at my short story and let me know what you think . 
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/351918110?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=TheDirtyMoonRabbit&wp_originator=3p97Vnz42yOuXY9X67zGJOk9u45suBOrBfYxD1iYGmU4ISQyIooHpZX7OoRCBmUJfm8iSX6zJ4He%2BcFfDhqHoK59995PJXcgcgrpQpYryRHFnLfexjLW01PiveJbPxet

thanks.for the vote