yoruichi_D

Hey I noticed you've Actually been following my book and I really appreciate you for that. The votes and all I really am grateful. I just wanted to ask if you can see anything I'm not doing right or offer any constructive criticisms on it if you have the time for it of course. Maybe something's a bit off and I'm not really hitting the spot well or something. Since it's my first writing it'd be nice if I saw what I was doing wrong. And thank you once again.

IziBook2

@yoruichi_D The cover is not gonna be a problem, just wanted to point it out because I know some people don't really like reading books with AI covers. Anyway,I  can't wait for the next chapter 🩵
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IziBook2

@yoruichi_D I know ball bhaha
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yoruichi_D

@IziBook2 on a second note 
            Wait, I haven't even published the part where I emphasize on the control theory yet. It's either you're superhuman💀 or you just know ball Soo well 
            But regardless I'm happy you understand.😂
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Atharr

Heyyy my love, I was wondering if you could give my story a read and let me know what you think. Thank you!❤️❤️

Atharr

@IziBook2 ahhh tyyy!<3
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IziBook2

@Atharr Hi, thank you  for texting me. Of course I will read it as soon as I can. 🩷
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troyapology

Happy birthdaaayyyy  (I hope it's the right day—I swear you wrote in the comments at some point that it's July 11th.)

IziBook2

Glad I helped
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troyapology

@IziBook2 yaaas thanks. Now i know which title to pick
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IziBook2

@1x-blue-x7 "In another life" sounds like doomed lovers  and "In every life" sounds like soulmates, something eternal so it sounds better to me but if I see either of these titles I'll immediately pick it up.
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