Deep4141

Hi, how’s it going? 
          
          I uploaded Chapters 6 and 7 of my story "Die Another Death: The Underworld relocated.........right into my town !!!" . I would very much like it if u could read them and comment on it. Feel free to criticize, point out typos and so on. Your feedback is important to me. If u like it, maybe u could vote for it and become a fan. ;-) :)) I will return the favor for your works. Thanks in advance !!!   ;-)  ;-)  
          Here’s the link to my story chapters- 
          http://www.wattpad.com/535720-die-another-death-the-underworld-relocated-right 
          http://www.wattpad.com/535804-die-another-death-the-underworld-relocated-right 
          

Deep4141

Hi, how’s it going?  
          I uploaded Chapters 4 and 5 of my story "Die Another Death: The Underworld relocated.........right into my town !!!" . I would very much like it if u could read them and comment on it. Feel free to criticize, point out typos and so on. If u like it, maybe u could vote for it and become a fan. ;-) :)) I will return the favor for your works. Thanks in advance !!!   ;-)  ;-)  Here's the link to my story- 
          
          http://www.wattpad.com/500304-die-another-death-the-underworld-relocated-right  
          http://www.wattpad.com/500318-die-another-death-the-underworld-relocated-right