IndiannaRyvers

Thank you you for adding my story to your library. 
          
          I completely understand what you mean, everyone is different but I also struggle with the beginning of a story as well. What you write sometimes never feels right at all. But trust me once you get through that everything just comes to you and you overflow with multiple ideas. Yours will definitely come to you. 

I just started Grace, and I really like the way you write her surrounded by people, but still emotionally guarded. The banter makes the Glade feel alive, but the moments with Minho feel different, like there is history, tension, and fear of wanting too much all mixed together. In my own YA romance, Lou and JJ have a chapter where they share one soft evening at a childhood place before he has to leave the next morning. Lou hides behind jokes and nervous overthinking, while JJ notices more than she expects. With Grace and Minho, do you think their tension comes more from the fact that they care too much, or from Grace being afraid that caring will only make losing him hurt worse?