@ImagineEverything
@ImagineEverything Heh, I wish I had gotten that before I got too deep. Ah, well. I already did it, so you'll get the full treatment everyone gets when I critique :-) It's all constructive, so don't worry. There will be no "OMG you suck!" statements.
@fauxpunker Cheers very much, I thank you for the interest! and sorry about the Spelling mistakes, I don't take this seriously I just do it for fun =) but some feedback would be nice =D
I see no one has welcomed you yet, so let me be the first. I'll be giving your story a look here in a minute and shooting some feedback your way. The search tags have me intrigued.
