Jay

@Paucorum (The symbol at the end was supposed to be a nodding head, but it came out wrong when the message was sent)

Heading back to reddit for overall plot and character arcs, but will drop a variety of little things that caught my attention in the side comments!

@I_Try_Writing even if there is no sequel I still find it impressive ☆ And will do my best to complete the chapter relatively soon :)  just have a bit much on my plate going forward so it might not be the quickest : ' ) ♡

@Paucorum thank you for appreciating my efforts. I'd say it took maybe a year to write Doghead. I'm a little worried I won't write a sequel. It was a lot of work, really tried to make a proper novel and it's easier to write something like killer healing (made for the internet, less effort).
            I look forward to the next chapter of Praline  

@I_Try_Writing yeah that’s the one. This is my other account 

@dafiction5 Alasia, is that the one? No immediate promise, but looks interesting.

@dafiction5 Yesss! Mid air cheek clapping is what we're here for!

@I_Try_Writing dude lizard liaisons is so good.  and no but I’ve been thinking. Why are these so good. Why are you so good at this stuff. ‍♀️ I need to up my game. 
            
            I’m still making them clap cheeks in the air. That’s hilarious. 

Dude the amount of anxiety that gives me. I had a story stuck on 199 forever. I was like if I need to make another account just to get it up I will. 

@GreyNightsaber might be, lol. I'm running on two hours of sleep today, but my simple thinking is, if I can forget where I'm at and lose myself in a read (which i did on my lunch break), it's a good read.

@GreyNightsaber I dunno... kinda sounds like butt kissing hahaha. Glad you like the main character of Doghead.
             Thank you for the positivity!

@I_Try_Writing Personally, the only AI I used is ChatGPT, not to copy and paste but to find ideas for the demon realm in my book, it's a bit hard to come up with an entire culture without any idea of where you're trying to start lol. I'm haven't been on Wattpad in years until this, so I wasn't sure how an appropriately long chapter is, I've just been writing until I felt like it came to an end, or until I ran out of ideas haha 

@N1XT13 absolutely that's understandable, i apologise for mentoining AI. makes sense that you got a bit carried away when starting. When I first decided to upload to WP i dumped several long chapters all at once haha.
            I struggle with making silly mistakes, very recently started using AI to help edit. Flipping between tenses is espeicially bad in my writing.
            Good luck!
            Honestly for WP, the length of your chapters is perfect, quick easy reads.

@I_Try_Writing an extension, some of the chapters are already pre written as I used to start and stop, I'd go in, edit, and finish them before publishing. I used to have a big problem with procrastinating and there are several that were just sitting there until I picked them back up. Thank you for the advice on schedule, it will probably be a good tactic and make me have time to make the chapters longer, recently I had a bad habit of "i can't sleep until this chapter is finished" but the next chapter I'll take your words in mind. Thank you

@I_Try_Writing hell yes!  

@TravelingSaint Now with consistent tense and improved clarity! Last section schelduled for May 12th.

@TravelingSaint ha, there's an authors note on first chapter, feedback welcome but project is for fun haha, so i think... you're OK- you might be dissapointed lol. also not finished yet- finishing soon. plus don't stress yourself, your book plus your much appreciated feedback on doghead come first. Thank you for your support.