
IICupcakesII
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Editing KBAAJ makes me feel like cutting out whole chapters - the writing was soo cringey and didn't relate to the story at all haha! So maybe having the story as 60-70 chapters would make it more appealing and less intimidating to new readers? WDYT? x
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@IICupcakesII I think it's a good idea to edit KBAAJ because when i read it i kept on noticing some mistakes and felt some bits weren't necessary.
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Amazing, thank you for the feedback! Defoe feel like I rambled on too much... I'll keep keep moments but otherwise, I don't think people were v interested in some bits in the chapter that may have set the mood for example, and would have rather just read the action bits : L
• ReplyIICupcakesII
Defo, I've deleted some bits but it's definitely a very looooong work in progress
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