IICupcakesII

Editing KBAAJ makes me feel like cutting out whole chapters - the writing was soo cringey and didn't relate to the story at all haha! So maybe having the story as 60-70 chapters would make it more appealing and less intimidating to new readers?
          	
          	WDYT? x

IICupcakesII

Defo, I've deleted some bits but it's definitely a very looooong work in progress
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IICupcakesII

Amazing, thank you for the feedback! Defoe feel like I rambled on too much... I'll keep keep moments but otherwise, I don't think people were v interested in some bits in the chapter that may have set the mood for example, and would have rather just read the action bits : L
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blink182off

@IICupcakesII I think it's a good idea to edit KBAAJ because when i read it i kept on noticing some mistakes and felt some bits weren't necessary.
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AprilJamaleddine

Hi, I hope this is the best place to put this. I didn't want to post with the book comments because it doesn't fit there.. But as the book kidnapped by the alpha jerk seems to take place in USA the car wreck has a minor mistake. I dont think anyone else noticed this but, Our cars have the steering wheel on the left, April would have been on the right if she's the passenger. Please take this  me trying to help I hope it doesn't come across rudely. I love the book so far its a wonderful writing. Thank you for sharing it.

JenniferFlanders8

@AprilJamaleddine yaas I did notice that to. But I understand maybe his cars have steering wheels on the right? . It's all good the story is great.
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buaratiamborkar

Hi
          I am here to tell you that someone named Leisadler1  did copy your story under same name kidnapped by an alpha jerk. 
          She /he only changed names other than that each and every words are same . Do something about it. And let me know. 
          And by the way I love reading werewolf books. 
          Take care

kidsA3

Hey. Hope you are having a good day . I love your books about the alpha. I really admire the way that you write. 
          I just wanted to let you know that there is another book that has been copied from yours. The author has stolen your ideas and put it in their book. You can search your books name and it will appear there. Thought I'd let you know as it is the right thing to do.
          Have a good day and stay safe in this covid.

ziqusha

Heyy. I just want to say how thankful i am for your book - kidnapped by an alpha jerk. 
          I first read it back in 2015. It was a series of unfortunate events for me that year and at that time this book comforted me. I have no idea why tho. 
          Even after five years, the only reason i still use wattpad is solely for this book. 
          I come back after every six months and re read it all. It is my ultimate coping mechanism.
           And every time i read i  learn something new, realize something new. 
          This book is magic to me. 
          Whenever i open wattpad im scared that it might be deleted. So please know that your book is my THE book. 
          Ofcourse i wish it was printed and i swear i would have bought every single edition of it. God i love it so much. Every single character is so complex and deep. As it all of this is actually real and has happened. 
          
          Thank you soooo much for writting this book and helping me.