Gujiya

snikers1508

Hi guys!!
          I'd like to appreciate if you give a try to my new book. It's my first time writing one so there are many ways i can improve. Your suggestions are valuable. 
          Book: Love the way you lie.
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/358252791?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=share_writing&wp_page=create&wp_uname=snikers1508&wp_originator=M4MUrGVHn7CJwdGDTVKXP65HO7TleJu1Ls7E1ug4aj2nKygmwDzYrPCExAIeNbNNiilmEak2IlepY6Xl6RLCeNeXEqWWDUV9FdcMKKL5LgZQ4f6Y%2B%2BkC50JYpy7nZ5JR
          

SabrinaSabor

Amazing books. I love both of them. Even though they could use some editing, you have great potential to be an amazing writer. I do hope you continue writing more soon. You have a very unique voice that you put into your writing that has me on the edge of my seat the whole book, so thank you.

SakoraTariq

you are a really good writer.. I like how much you delivered the feelings.. I only read broken but yours and it reached  the bottom of my heart  .. I also like how u didn't add too much of unnecessarily sexual content .. u kept the relationship of the couple pure but yet exciting .. I think it's not interesting when some people write a detailed sexual content in a love story, they don't keep anything for suspense 
          I will start reading unwanted desire .. I'm looking forward to it and I hope to find it as interesting .. but I have one complaint ‍♀️.. can u plz not write too long novels .. I spent 9 hours in broken but yours too excited to left my head up or take a break .. on the long term, your novels are harmful to my eyes and brain  

Gujiya

@SakoraTariq hahaha...thanks a lot and really sorry for your eyes. 
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