Guermo

I republished my old short story titled 'Magnitudes'. I did some minor editing here and there, fixing the major problem that the story had: the pacing. I believe that the story is worth taking a look at as I experiment a bit with stream of consciousness. 
          	
          	This story at one point was also part of my novel, 'TMDS'. Perhaps I will add it later as I am experimenting a lot with the novel. Take a look at it and tell me what you think. 
          	
          	Thank you all and have a good day. :)

Guermo

I republished my old short story titled 'Magnitudes'. I did some minor editing here and there, fixing the major problem that the story had: the pacing. I believe that the story is worth taking a look at as I experiment a bit with stream of consciousness. 
          
          This story at one point was also part of my novel, 'TMDS'. Perhaps I will add it later as I am experimenting a lot with the novel. Take a look at it and tell me what you think. 
          
          Thank you all and have a good day. :)

Guermo

I'm almost 2 years into writing this novel and I'm not even close to finishing it. I don't understand how people are able to finish books so quickly. I can barely write a chapter now. And rewriting and editing is a thing I do on the daily. Still, much has to be corrected, thrown away, and written once more. It's like I'm reaching nowhere. And the plot is really not that great. To be honest, it's quite boring. I am trying to make it a literary wonder but I am failing miserably. Am I missing something? 

Guermo

I haven't updated for some time now due to school and life in general. Hopefully, now that I have more spare time I can work on my story. I published what I had of chapter 8 today just to restart my momentum once more.  I'll keep writing in the days to come. :)

Guermo

@TheGreatSphinx I'm happy to be back, thanks for the reply. :)
            I'll read as much from you when I have the chance too.
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MademoiselleCarmen

@Guermo Hey! Welcome back/long time no see!
            Completely understandable and I'm in the same position. Hope to hear and read from you more! x
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Guermo

Chapter V is now out. Go check it out and tell me what you think. This was a very short chapter as I have been very undecided on how to portray Mazie's and Jair's relationship. I first wrote a scene where they interacted through phones but I felt as if it were not genuine and that it held no relevance as to what I tried to do with the story. I'm still struggling to show what I want to show, but I believe this is a good start to what the end goal is. I'm sorry for not posting the chapter over the weekend. It's just been a train-wreck to write out this chapter. Deleting and rewriting is definitely not something I personally enjoy doing. Next one should be relatively easy to write. I already know and have what I want out of the story, it'll just be a matter of squeezing the best out of it. 
          
          Anyways, I've been receiving quite a lot of attention lately thanks to this book.  For those who've recently followed me, thank you very much. I promise I'll bring you the best quality content I can make. I don't post chapters unless I feel quite confident with it.  I hope this story manages to inspire some sort of spark in all of you. 
          
          Thank you all. See you in the next couple of days for the update. :)

Guermo

Although I spent a lot of time, I had to erase a large chunk of the new chapter. I just did not feel like it was important for the story as a whole. I will not be able to publish a new chapter today, but I will be working to have one tomorrow.
          
          That's just a little update of what's going on. Thank you.

Guermo

School can be tough some times. I have an important exam tomorrow and it's midnight right now. I also have a report to do but that's less important. I have about an hour to work on it tomorrow and I've already started it. 
          
          To anyone who's having trouble with work or school, cheer up. Better times are around the corner. Numbers cannot describe the entirety of an individual. So let's keep going at it. 
          
          Cheers.