GhostOfTheEclipse

If I had to change something in my story what should it be? I don't wanna see "Your story is already good!" I wanna see things I can actually improve on. I can't just stick with one thing forever with correcting it

Posiblydanger

Oh my god, you are cooking

Posiblydanger

@ GhostOfTheEclipse  Well, thank you, and indeed, you are doing a pretty good job at making it not the same repetitive thing that many others do. I honestly think myself my history is mid by the way, a surprise hearing a fellow writter liking it. Anyways, keep on the good job man
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GhostOfTheEclipse

@Posiblydanger and honestly I'm kinda jealous of your story and the amount of words you have on there 
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GhostOfTheEclipse

@Posiblydanger thanks man I'm trying to see if I can make my own unique style of an ultrakill story and so far I think I'm doing ok though I'm pretty sure I'm gonna rewrite a couple of things or maybe the entire thing and keep some parts
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