I am concerned with my first story's plot, like seriously...
I am considering unpublishing it, but I still want to be given feedback with my current style of writing, which I feel is lacking. The story feels like jank, and I have no idea how to shove the Phenex into the story in the proper way.
Should I rework the story, the basic idea may remain, but the events may change, as they do not make any sense at the moment.