
OfficialWa1fu
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FuntimeSunny_Plays
@OfficialWa1fu Yeah, it's fiction but that's still a bit weird to me. Also I would rewrite it to be an oc because y/n = your name and I'm 16 years old. So I would feel more comfortable if I was writing about an oc his age being with him. I also just didn't like the it was written, like there's some holes I feel like so I would just try to patch those and stray away from SB since half the fic is just the game Security Breach written with another person which wouldn't be very realistic.
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OfficialWa1fu
@FuntimeSunny_Plays tbh you got a point but its fiction and i dont think anyone would care as long as you serve the chapters lmao, about the oc or re-write why do you need to re-write it? i think its very well made and there arent old cringy mistakes from fanfics over 6 years old, and there are barely any reader x gregory fanfics (especially long ones i mean) so this is why this stood out , (i just cant be bothered to wait for a rewrite i need to know like from after the last chapter you posted LMAO) at the end its ur decision, also i wanna know why you wanna make it an oc
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