FirewingofWindClan

Hallooooooo! Just letting y'all know I'm starting a new book! (yes, another one, I know) It's called Timeline, you guys should totally go check it out!

FirewingofWindClan

Hey guys! Thank you all so much for supporting me as I finished off Taken! It's done now, those of you who haven't finished it should totally do so! Hope you like the ending! 
          ANYWAY.
          I'm starting a new story! It's going to be called King Of Blades, and it follows the main character Captain Nera Reathe as she travels the land with the famed warrior King of Blades. You can take it as a Technoblade tribute if you want ;)
          So, happy reading!

FirewingofWindClan

Hey guys! I know I haven't updated Taken or The Forgotten Legend recently, but I'm trying to get back onto a schedule so expect more regular updates! And remember, any suggestions and/or ideas you comment may very well be added into the story! Happy reading!

myearsareringing

Do you mind if I constructively criticise your work?

myearsareringing

@FirewingofWindClan i reckon you should make your paragraphs a but shorter, like split them in half or something like that. Other than that i love the way you write :)
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FirewingofWindClan

Nah go ahead it's helpful! I'll always take into consideration anything from y'all!
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