SUCKS TO YOUR ASS-MAR

I write fanfics 
please comment on how I can improve them please and Thank you. 

"I'm not gonna say anything inspirational, I'm just gonna fucking swear alot" -Billie Joe Armstrong 


Just call me AJ ?

?William "Bill" Denbourgh?
?Ritchie Tozier ?
?Eddie Kaspbrak?
?Stanley Uris?
✂Beverly Marsh✂
?Ben Hanscom?
?Mike Hanlon?
"WE'RE THE LOSERS, BUT WE'RE WINNING." 


HEADLINES DON'T SELL PAPES...NEWSIES SELL PAPES

"You punched me in the face, made me walk through shitty water, brought me to a fucking crack head house...and now...I'm gonna have to kill this fucking clown." - Richie Tozier