EverAfterHighLover

I'm going to be rewriting The New Phoenix cause the way it is now is trash.

Naytohta

i'm a new writer and i recently started writing a book called REINCARNATION: the story of us.
          I would love it if you could read it and leave me some feedback about the writing style, synopsis, your enjoyment level, do i put in enough details, do you feel connected with the characters. i would really love us to have a discussion on the book in the future if thats possible.
          
          It is a romantic fantasy about the life and death of the High priestess Chay-ara and the prince Khufu. They were cursed to die by the hands of hath-seth in every lifetime. And now after 206 deaths will they survive the next or will they make the same mistakes?
          Please can you all Check out my book i promise it'll be worthwhile.
          Please do read it and give me your honest feedback. i would love to see my book from a readers perspective. Thank you all. 
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/197037922?

BloodWolf16

I just started you book and I already love it l. I wish you luck.
          

EverAfterHighLover

@BloodWolf16 um I've been watch Guilty Crown. it's awesome. and right now I've been listening to the band The GazettE.  their did the theme song for Black Butler.
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BloodWolf16

@EverAfterHighlover  its ok I understand. I ,my self , am in school and I have not written in a long  time.  I have the feeling I will start over on quit a lot of my stories. Just know I'm here if you want to talk and I love reading and to watch anime as well anything you recommend?
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