Endure Existence

There's a book that I've always wanted to write called 'Darkness is my Friend', but I've never had enough time to write it out, mostly because of my studies, and I keep on coming up with different ways to write it, or I loose confidence, or I suddenly think of a new direction to take it in, and it usually gets written at 2 in the morning when I have sudden bouts of inspiration, but I've decided that I want some feedback, so I'm probably going to write the same story in different styles, or with slight alterations. Please note, this is entirely experimental, and most of these stories will never be completed, so please just tell me which ones you prefer, and I'll see if I can develop that.