ElizabethGraceJames

MarinaMaher

Hi, Elizabeth. I am so intrigued by your works. I'm so excited to get started on checking them out. Looks like you'll be getting constant responses from me if you don't mind :) Have a great day <3

ElizabethGraceJames

@MarinaMaher 
            Hi Marina, it's very nice to meet you! Thank you for noticing my work and I'd love your responses and feedback.  I'm also happy to look at your wonderful work and comment!  Hope you have a wonderful day :)
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ElizabethGraceJames

@BeccaFazzio  thanks girl!  You are too sweet.... I really want to read through your other chapters too... I feel like I did.... I'd love to comment more but maybe you're still working on them?  I'm interested in where your story is going.... I'm doing great, sold a few paintings so that's always nice!.... I'm also heading to the mountains with my son, he's 14 almost 15 and it's our thing we like to do.... my parents own a log cabin built in 1889, I love going there to write and paint... my husband can be a bit type A and always has an agenda when we go... plans out everything... my son is like me and that sort of thing drives us nuts!  So we love going and doing NOTHING except what we feel like!   How are you doing with your new twins?  I just can't imagine.... I really can't.. I hope you have family help...as you have probably learned the best thing is to keep a schedule as far as naps... but I know they are probably still too little to stick to a routine... I'm not a routine person but I quickly found the value in a predictable schedule.... I miss having babies!  hehe... I had my three kids in 2 and 1/2 years... and was done.. they are all a grade apart in school, 7th 8th and 9th.... it's been fun having them close though and you will truly enjoy that once you can see the light of day!   My real name is Amy btw.... I don't like to really use it on public sites... Elizabeth Grace James are my three kids middles names..and I will publish using that as a pen name I think.. Ok i'm rambling! Gotta pack !!!

AVentura31

Can you give some advice? So that i can write a story that they will love?

ElizabethGraceJames

And not neon. Lol. I mean main character. 
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ElizabethGraceJames

Your account seems activated.  
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ElizabethGraceJames

I think I see two stories on your page.  But written in another language.  I'm happy to help you but not sure I'm qualified.  How to get their heart. Let's see.  You must develop sympathy for your neon character. The reader must care and decide to invest in them because they care about what happens.  You must ALWAYS create sympathy.  Does that help? 
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