aloisahart

Thanks for adding Love, Novela! Hope you enjoy it!

aloisahart

Thank you! I’m not sure it can end much differently but it definitely needs some rewriting. Hopefully that might make it a bit smoother and more acceptable, if not quite satisfactory. I appreciate the feedback!
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ElizabethAClaire

@aloisahart Hi, I enjoyed it so much! Your writing is so good; you have got great flow and the language... .  I couldn't get over the ending though. Wish it could've ended differently
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