RebelDreamer21

Omg you are my new best friend on wattpad!!!! I love Sarah J. Maas!!!!

Efutue_Stercus

@RebelDreamer21 if you want to talk, DM me.
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RebelDreamer21

@RebelDreamer21 ikr! thanks for the follow by the way!
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MattRey876

Thanks for the follow. I'll be happy to review your book but I'm not much of a critique but I'll be honest as I possibly can. Meanwhile I would love for you to check out my book, at least the first chapter, and tell me what you think. Thanks again :)

MattRey876

@MattRey876 sorry when I got the message I thought it was in the book lol. Thanks I'm trying my best. ill review your book later on in the day and give you a feedback 
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Efutue_Stercus

I was entertained at the first chapter. i got intrigued with the girl. it was really dark and gore. you've got a good imagination of writing details, keep it up. I'm not a good writer but I think your sentences are mouthful. I suggest you shorten it and write it directly to the point. cause if the sentences are long, it loses the readers interest. don't forget the spaces of each word, it confuses the readers. thoughout the entire scene was entertaining.
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