Dyque_

Descriptive writing… you are my enemy…

Dyque_

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There are books that I regret reading on this app, like smut between idolxreader or idolxidol, but there’s this ONE book that I regret reading the most and I personally believe that it should get unpublished.
          I don’t remember the name of it on the top of my head but it’s a SanaxReader book and it’s gross because it contains p3dophilia. (Sana is a 23 year old teacher and Y/n is a 15 year old student)
          
          I myself don’t have problems with IdolxReader books but the ones with SERIOUS topics like p3dophilia, inc3st, n3crophilia, and other stuff like that I DO have a problem with.
          It doesn’t matter if it’s fiction or not, writing and fantasizing about those kinds of things is fucking gross. 
          
          Now back to that Sana book, when I first read it, I didn’t see any problem with it because I was young and stupid, but now that it has been a year since I’ve read it, it actually disgusts me that someone decided to write that. What makes it worse is that people in the comments were trying to justify p3dophilia by saying stuff like “age is only a number ;)”
          
          Just because it’s someone you’re attracted to, doesn’t make it any less immoral than it already is. P3dophilia in ANY WAY is wrong no matter what. What if I replaced Sana with an creepy old man, would you still be saying “age is just a number”? Would you still be “willing” to be with them if they weren’t as pretty or handsome?
          
          “Well the age of consent is-“ The age of consent is only for minors to consent to other minors, not for kids to consent to fully grown adults.
          
          Yes, I agree that Love is Love and that people should be with whoever they want but that’s only towards people who are of age and/or people in their age group, ex. 17y/oX17y/o. Not adultxchild or humanxanimal or siblingxsibling.
          
          Don’t try to justify p3dophilia or anything like that, it’ll just make you look like a bad person.

Dyque_

I just remembered my favourite Sana ff and like,,, i can’t cause not only did it get unpublished, the author also lost the files so it’s gone forever :( there was this one merry go round scene and it stays in my mind forever

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@Dyque_ can u share it with us? I wanna give it a try :)
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Dyque_

ITS BACK
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Dyque_

I respect the authors choice but like, I wanted to read it one last time
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Dyque_

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When I’m reading a story, I can tolerate bad grammar cause of course not everyone is going to be good at English (Me included) but when the format is weird and/or the plot is empty then that’s when I stop reading. 
          
          For example, if the format is like:
          
          Mark: Blah blah blah
          Johnny: Blah blah blah blah
          Sally: Blah blah
          *and then they use this for action*
          
          Then I’m just gonna leave right there. Maybe I’m being to harsh but please just write an actual story and not a script. Like write down and describe their feelings, write down and describe what they do and not use *this shit*, write down and describe the scenery without just giving us a block of adjectives.
          
          Having a good plot is crucial to the story but so is the way you write it. If you don’t write it properly then you’re just going to drive your readers away. Some of us has standards and reading a story that doesn’t have proper format is just going to make us avoid it.

Dyque_

I really went full on Fanfic critic
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Dyque_

Same thing if there’s no paragraph breaks like no one is going to read one giant block of words.
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