Drag0nborn

Hey, I'm not self permoting or anything, but I need constructive criticism on my new book. It's called Love In Hell, and would really appreciate it if you could read it and give me some advice. Thanks for reading! :)
          

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          D O V A H K I I N :0

Sorry to anyone maybe looking forward to the Skyrim things I've been writing. I'm done writing for a while or at least until I can get rid of this writer's block. 

@PixlatedShipper YES IT IS I