monasabay0010

I really wish you would write more of your story. Maybe keep both up, but separate them so we can read them that way. Old verses new, something like that.
          
          You seem like you have a good start to a story here. It would be a shame not to finish, or at least continue it some. I know it’s hard sometimes to write and not get people here to read them. Just know that some of us are reading what you are writing. And that at least I think you are doing a good job at it.