@ Marcello86
Dude, thank you so much for this. Seriously, this is some of the most thoughtful and motivating feedback I could have ever asked for.
Especially your comment about letting the 'subtext and tone carry it' – that's exactly what I was aiming for, and it means the world that you called it 'art'. Challenge accepted on making it even scarier! ;)
Thanks again for taking the time, man. Truly appreciate it.