@DeeRezzed I've read your pieces and I do like your writing style. Some minor polishing issues I have is to not use "it" at all or "there" instead specify what and if the specified object is at the beginning of the sentence, find a way to rephrase. Ex. The dog and it's owner went out for a walk. -> The owner and their dog went out for a walk together. Ex. There was a bird on that house. -> A bird sits on the house. Also, keep track of your tenses, I noticed that you go between past and present tenses frequently. Choose one and stick to it. Overall, I'd like to see more of your work, keep it up!
