DeeDee7701

I've kept up with a few of the stories I follow from a second account I had to create. But, I've missed a few over the past 3 weeks. Life threw my family a curve. My younger brother passed away somewhat unexpectedly 3 weeks ago. Of course, our Mother was practically inconsolable. (For context, my brothers and I are middle aged+ adults. But, a mother's love doesn't fade just because you have a few birthdays.) 
          	And Dad has been suffering from Alzheimer's for quite a long time. So, several times a day, we would have to explain about my brothers passing, and watch him relive the news like he was hearing about it for the first time. 
          	My mother is one of the most amazing people I've ever met. While dealing with her own grief, still answering my father's never ending questions. I took Dad on a lot of "Daddy -daughter" dates to give Mom a break. That won't end, just because I have returned home. He got used to having me around again (⁠•⁠‿⁠•⁠) but spring has sprung, and my poor yard needs mowed. So I'll have to split my time between both places. 
          	It's funny how things work out. I sold my home across the state, and moved closer to my parents less than a year ago. My mom has needed me several times since the move. I'm just glad I can return just some of what my parents gave me, growing up. 
          	Not everyone is blessed with good parents. It took me becoming a parent myself, to truly understand and appreciate the parents I have. (⁠⊃⁠。⁠•́⁠‿⁠•̀⁠。⁠)⁠⊃ Now, go hug your Momma!

DeeDee7701

I've kept up with a few of the stories I follow from a second account I had to create. But, I've missed a few over the past 3 weeks. Life threw my family a curve. My younger brother passed away somewhat unexpectedly 3 weeks ago. Of course, our Mother was practically inconsolable. (For context, my brothers and I are middle aged+ adults. But, a mother's love doesn't fade just because you have a few birthdays.) 
          And Dad has been suffering from Alzheimer's for quite a long time. So, several times a day, we would have to explain about my brothers passing, and watch him relive the news like he was hearing about it for the first time. 
          My mother is one of the most amazing people I've ever met. While dealing with her own grief, still answering my father's never ending questions. I took Dad on a lot of "Daddy -daughter" dates to give Mom a break. That won't end, just because I have returned home. He got used to having me around again (⁠•⁠‿⁠•⁠) but spring has sprung, and my poor yard needs mowed. So I'll have to split my time between both places. 
          It's funny how things work out. I sold my home across the state, and moved closer to my parents less than a year ago. My mom has needed me several times since the move. I'm just glad I can return just some of what my parents gave me, growing up. 
          Not everyone is blessed with good parents. It took me becoming a parent myself, to truly understand and appreciate the parents I have. (⁠⊃⁠。⁠•́⁠‿⁠•̀⁠。⁠)⁠⊃ Now, go hug your Momma!

DeeDee7701

Let me start by saying I fully understand that I am reading stories for free, on a free website, written by amateur writers. 
          That being said... 
          Maybe, don't state the date of your next chapter update. When your followers don't get said update, though I would never be mean about it, I am disappointed. 
          
          Whew  I hadn't ranted in a while. I usually just go back and delete them after a bit. I'm all for uplifting others. Put a little positivity out there. It'll come back to you 

PsychoticPink

Thank you for your vote, your comment, for adding RBP to your reading list and for the follow (followed back) 。⁠◕⁠‿⁠◕⁠。 I really appreciate it. Hope you enjoy reading the next chapters (regular updates every Tuesday and Saturday) Have a great day! (⁠*⁠^⁠3⁠^⁠)⁠/⁠~⁠♡

DeeDee7701

A suggestion to authors... When naming your characters, please name them with strongly different names. If I'm reading a story, and the main characters are named Richard, Raymond, Ronald and Ricardo IT'S CONFUSING! Then add in Raina, Remi and a minor character named Bob to the mix.  Bob is the only one you can remember without going back to check the character's descriptions. If I get too confused or have to take a moment to figure out who the author is writing about; I will give up on the story. Even though you may have a great story line! Rant over .

DeeDee7701

I know it's an oxymoron to say unrealistic while reading a werewolf story. But... I'm currently reading a human /werewolf romance, and of course there's the self doubt and inner monologue. Coming close to realizing that the feelings are mutual. But then again, being plagued by self doubt. Back and forth. But, after the third back and forth. Dang, I'm starting to get whiplash! Have the characters figure it out and move on with the story! 20 chapters of self doubt. 20 times dropping MaJoR hints that they are interested. Followed by 20 make out sessions. Then the dummy still can't figure out that they are interested. Come on.

bkhutso

Hi, I just finished writing this book and I don't know if it will interest you. If not and I somehow offended you by messaging you then I'm sorry, but if I didn't, I hope you enjoy. The book's called The Elementorial. Thank you for your time. ʕ•̬͡•ʔ
          
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