SasquatchTheGreat

Hey, mate. I wanted to say thanks for the votes and comments you left for my story. It's a big morale boost. I also wanted to potentially ask what you like or don't like about it; for science purposes. :)

Deadowl_17

idk what else to say
            
            Also when do you think that you could be able to publish the next chapter?
            Forgive me if I sound too rude.
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SasquatchTheGreat

@Deadowl_17 I can see it! Cute rendition. :)
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Karodriguez1987

Thanks for voting on my story, do you mind me asking what you like or don’t like about it?

Deadowl_17

@Karodriguez1987  
            The moment Darkstalker shows up, the whole plot crumbles away.
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Karodriguez1987

Thanks, that really means a lot to me, I’m doing my best to make the story make as much sense as possible (thank goodness I haven’t stepped into animus magic yet), make the characters feel like the original characters, and stay as original as possible. I think it’s turning out well. Thanks for your input.
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Deadowl_17

@Karodriguez1987  oh ok
            
            
            What I liked:
            Hunter didn't arrive exactly when the dragonets arrived (I like stories which explores places we don't know about.)
            Hunter has more control over the timeline and isn't being thrown around like a cool toy.
            
            What I don't like:
            Nothing, its just a rrly good book
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AprilJester

Thank you for voting on If You Asked Me To!  
          
          I have another in this world if you're interested. I'm so glad you liked it! 

Deadowl_17

@april_jester  yeah I read the 2nd book about clover
            I feel like it's good that u gave a bit of background to clover and she wasn't immediately drawn to the kymari for their sunburst berries and had good development to her handler. 
            It felt a bit too much like Tasha's story but it's still a good fanfic.
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AprilJester

Imagine is more like that as she's the second generation and was never human. She just wants out of the flock.
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Deadowl_17

@april_jester I'm soo glad that u made a story where the dragonets at least keep a bit of their humanity.
            It's frustrating to read any other fanfic about 'Upon wings of change' without it having the dragonets acting like lap-dogs for the kymari for no apparent reason and throwing away their humanity like it was nothing. It was getting rrly overused. 
            Thankfully u made a story where the dragonet kept it's humanity while being with the kymari for a good reason and being treated like an Intelligent species should. It was the only story that was short but great at the same time.
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