ScarlettBlackDaisy

Just noticed you've given my story a chance. So I'm dropping by to let you know that I truly appreciate it and hope you'll find my work worth-it. Feedback and comments are more than welcome. Once again, thank you so much for making my day better ❤️

lynex_sud

lynex_sud

@lynex_sud Thank you! Sorry for confusing you, but it was written in first person, his Pov are quite not clear 'i guess' 'cause of his aloof Character, in the next chapter, the other guy will lead the story. I hope you give it a try. Thank you again!! I really appreciate your comment. ☺️
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Dashing_Hot_Buns

@lynex_sud  Hey I read your book. I am I little bit confused. Is the story being written in peom format, third person or first person. I am going to wait until you upload more chapters to keep reading . Because I feel like then the plot will develop more and then I can give you proper feed back. Thank you for letting me read you work. Keep writing you can only get better.
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