DREAM_MASTER

@asiamacky I just finished your story. It's good I like how you keep it short and on topic. Just some questions though. Is she writing in a diary or is this in her head? I ask because when she talks there's not a lot of quotations to indicate she's talking. Also if you go the path of using more dialogue it'll give your story more of a boost ya know? For example like the beginning, I would put the conversation she had with this mysterious new guy. Also I like how you have this clique called "dolls". Maybe play a little bit of drama with this. Like the dolls could be always picking on her or something. I hope this helps. I like this story so far it's so mysterious and makes me excited for what will happen next. Keep writing! And I'll keep reading! ;)

asiamacky

@DREAM_MASTER thanks so much for your feed back. And the story is in her mind. I got some ideas about the girls with drama but it won't be until later in the story. Thanks again
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fangirl7398

is the supernatural fabrication beginning to the end completed? is it's not, please update.

DREAM_MASTER

@fangirl7398 I'm so glad you like you love it! I've been working really hard on it and unfortunately things keep getting in the way. But it's nice to hear that people actually want to read my book and think that I am good writer because I don't think so. But thank you so much!
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fangirl7398

@DREAM_MASTER thank you for replying. I totally understand the time thing. I love you book you are a very good writer!
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DREAM_MASTER

@fangirl7398 It is not yet completed. I will try to update asap. Unfortanately work has taken up a lot of my time lately and I apologize for the lack of updates. I'm trying to update by next week sometime, but don't quote me on that for things may change. Thank you very much for reading my story and I'm glad you are enjoying it!
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DREAM_MASTER

@asiamacky I just finished your story. It's good I like how you keep it short and on topic. Just some questions though. Is she writing in a diary or is this in her head? I ask because when she talks there's not a lot of quotations to indicate she's talking. Also if you go the path of using more dialogue it'll give your story more of a boost ya know? For example like the beginning, I would put the conversation she had with this mysterious new guy. Also I like how you have this clique called "dolls". Maybe play a little bit of drama with this. Like the dolls could be always picking on her or something. I hope this helps. I like this story so far it's so mysterious and makes me excited for what will happen next. Keep writing! And I'll keep reading! ;)

asiamacky

@DREAM_MASTER thanks so much for your feed back. And the story is in her mind. I got some ideas about the girls with drama but it won't be until later in the story. Thanks again
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DREAM_MASTER

Hello Dreamers! So ik y'all are probs upset with me for not updating in like forever but 've been extremely busy and my laptop broke so I'm waiting on repairs /replacement. Sorry no excuses but I also need some help in a bit of a writer's block. My destiel story the action speak louder than words one I need ideas . I also need help with a why me so any ideas for that I know how I want the story to go I just don't know what I want to write next. Can anyone please help with those? Another thing I wanted to ask was I am also writing a Dr. Who fanfiction and a Sherlock fanfiction , would you guys like me to post what I have now, or would you like me to write it all and then post ? Please let me know what you all think you can contact me here or you can kik me at DR3AM_MAST3R! Or if you just feel like chatting you can kik me as well! Hope to hear from you soon! Oh also wanted to thank you all for following me and giving me 151 followers I love you all lots thanks guys! You have no idea how much that means to me so I'm glad you guys are following me although why you are following me I have no idea but thank you! So if you could please let me know what cleaning if you have any ideas or maybe just want to chat let me know . Hope to hear from you soon and sweet dreams dreamers!

DREAM_MASTER

Ok y'all so I know I told you all last week but I have finals next week an I've been busy studying. Also I feel it would be unfair if I only updated one story and not the others. I will be posting ASAP I promise just not today. Again I'm really sorry and thank you for all the follows!!!! Love you all and sweet dreams Dreamers!!!!

DREAM_MASTER

I'm so sorry for keeping y'all waiting everyone but I've been extremely busy with school, trying to get into the nursing program, wish me luck! Also been stressed and battling my own inner demons so hopefully things will get smoother and I can update soon. Hopefully gonna get a chap on each story out by Friday. Also opinions? Ik I've written a lot of stories and not done with them but I've been working on a Doctor Who as well so should you guys want to follow along or should I finish it and then post? I leave the decision in your hands. Please help. Thanks and sweet dreams dreamers! ;)