@ExtinctNEMESIS Yeah of course I can help, I have read over what you have on your new Naruto Hatake fanfic and I would add Naruto building some more friendships in his class with you know Shikamaru, Choji, Kiba, Shino and maybe sasuke if you want to add him, and maybe add a relationship to Naruto like Naruto and whoever. When I was reading Naruto's training it was kinda void of information so I would try to add more to that area including taijutsu, kenjutsu(Swordsmanship) and maybe also fuinjutsu as well because I always think that it is interesting that Naruto could do all of this stuff. Sorry that this might not be the best of idea's or suggestions since I only just started writing not even a month ago but try and work on those idea's and then just continue the plot line of Naruto as it went originally like the wave mission, chunin exams and so on.
