myrag09

Excellent new chapter! I love the fact that you made the origin story a flashback. The way you brought that flashback into the story is very original as well.
          Lastly, you described it with all the details required to make it a compelling read. You truly are an amazing writer.
          I am very much looking forward to the next chapter, if or when you can write it.
          Best regards,
          Gary

CrimsonResistance

@myrag09 thanks again for all your detailed reviews. I try to do my best to change things up and give readers a unique insight on these characters, and comments like these help me write!
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myrag09

Woohoo! Great to see you adding a new chapter to your masterpiece! I loved it, and the fact that it didn't contain a transformation in it made it even better, because it builds up tension and anticipation for when the next one will happen!
          Keep up your excellent writing. This is hands down one of the greatest S-H stories I've ever read.
          Best regards,
          Gary

CrimsonResistance

@myrag09 just wanted to say thank you for all your kind words, albeit it much belatedly on my part. I really appreciate the review and hope you're still enjoying the story!
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