CloakedBow
@ClaytonAllenBell Will try to get to it. I've looked at the list of authors you like and I like them too, so I'm sure your stories are great. Work's crazy though, so I'm trying to balance everything. LIFE, lol!
baggrd
You got 100+ reads! Congrats!
baggrd
@CloakedBow well, you'll soon be getting 100s of reads, so while it really isn't that much, it's kind of like a child's first steps, it's special in it's own ways! And I'll proudly be able to say I was here before. . . Uh, 3 reads? 10? Meh dunno if you can see these, but just know, here's some corn and carrots for your efforts.
baggrd
Yo? You want some constructive advice/criticism, right?
In your skyrim book, I made a mistake, if you're going to go for having Beric companions, don't give him more than one, since he just lost drake [who I'd say could be like a brother figure?], Leo [Pops], and Reshi [pseudo mum], I'd say make him a bit more hard pressed on making more connections and friends.
When I made that comment, I either hadn't read up to that part, or I forgot about it in the moment, so ignore that.
Have a great day!
baggrd
@CloakedBow I don't believe Drake's dead yet(right?) , if he isn't, do make Beric either try to rescue him, in Skyrim, there's an Aldemieri Dominion Embassy, near I think the top of the map, dunno, but there they keep their prisoners, theres another, but I don't know the details. Happy to help!
CloakedBow
@Smaravm Yeah, I was gonna have Drake the wingman throughout the whole thing. I was going to add two more original characters by the end though. A mentor figure and a comic relief one.
baggrd
Before I sleep, thanks for the follow!
Right, I'll leave you to your own devices now, enjoy!
baggrd
Do keep up that skyrim Fanfic/novel, what ever, you're writting!
Personally, I'm a bit biased towards the protagonist since my own mc was an imperial once, and I'm sure his stairs are smilling down upon him ;)
baggrd
@CloakedBow yeah, that's what I meant, thanks for understanding though! Also, sorry, but I kind of feel dirty by being the only one reading your book, I hope more people read it, it's billions better than many I've read on here, let's keep it that way, right?
CloakedBow
@Smaravm I'm not sure about the crossover, though. They're literally hundreds of years apart. To be realistic, I don't think I should. I might reference it though.
CloakedBow
@Smaravm No problem. As my sister says, "You need to give the audience what they want." Right now, you're the only one telling me what you want.