Cinderblaze

Guess I'm gonna start rewriting the Challengers series...
          	
          	I reread what I write every so often because, ya know, you wanna read the world you've created and if you're like me you kinda want to see how much you've improved. But in my latest reading of it, I was dissatisfied, I didn't enjoy it like I usually do. So I'm going to rewrite it for three reasons.
          	
          	First, I don't like Silverwind as a character as much as I used to. Don't get me wrong, I still love Silverwind, she's my baby, I just didn't really enjoy her as much as a character in the series. She's still going to be the main character and from her point of view, but I'm going to try to make her better this time.
          	
          	Second, the relationships weren't developed correctly. I never noticed or had a problem with this before but this time I noticed. The relationships just kinda happened suddenly instead of gradually like a normal relationship.
          	
          	Lastly, because it was poorly written. There's a lot of stuff I could and will add to draw it out more, make it make more sense, stay more true to the universe Erin Hunter created, and add more detail. There will be more of basically everything to make this redo 100 times better. There will be scenes that weren't in the original, some will be altered some to make more sense and again stay true to the Erin Hunter world, or nearly changed completely. So don't be alarmed if you read both and they aren't exactly the same because that's the point of this, to make it in my opinion better because I feel the original wasn't good.  I don't know if I'll keep the original on or not, or if I don't keep it up, I don't know how much longer I'll keep it on.
          	
          	Congrats if you made it this far, I know this is pretty long but I just wanted to share this with my present and future followers, and anyone who may be browsing my page. Yeah, I see you. Anyway this should be a fun project, at least I hope it will be.
          	
          	~Cici (Cinderblaze)

Cinderblaze

Guess I'm gonna start rewriting the Challengers series...
          
          I reread what I write every so often because, ya know, you wanna read the world you've created and if you're like me you kinda want to see how much you've improved. But in my latest reading of it, I was dissatisfied, I didn't enjoy it like I usually do. So I'm going to rewrite it for three reasons.
          
          First, I don't like Silverwind as a character as much as I used to. Don't get me wrong, I still love Silverwind, she's my baby, I just didn't really enjoy her as much as a character in the series. She's still going to be the main character and from her point of view, but I'm going to try to make her better this time.
          
          Second, the relationships weren't developed correctly. I never noticed or had a problem with this before but this time I noticed. The relationships just kinda happened suddenly instead of gradually like a normal relationship.
          
          Lastly, because it was poorly written. There's a lot of stuff I could and will add to draw it out more, make it make more sense, stay more true to the universe Erin Hunter created, and add more detail. There will be more of basically everything to make this redo 100 times better. There will be scenes that weren't in the original, some will be altered some to make more sense and again stay true to the Erin Hunter world, or nearly changed completely. So don't be alarmed if you read both and they aren't exactly the same because that's the point of this, to make it in my opinion better because I feel the original wasn't good.  I don't know if I'll keep the original on or not, or if I don't keep it up, I don't know how much longer I'll keep it on.
          
          Congrats if you made it this far, I know this is pretty long but I just wanted to share this with my present and future followers, and anyone who may be browsing my page. Yeah, I see you. Anyway this should be a fun project, at least I hope it will be.
          
          ~Cici (Cinderblaze)