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@MusingsOfTheFourth Then I will be waiting and wish you a good writing. 

@MusingsOfTheFourth Thanks for the helpful advice! And don't worry, this is only the beginning part of the story, which means that Adele will definitely become more active and focused on in future chapters the more she learns about this new world she's in.

@MusingsOfTheFourth It's great  I just wish you won't make her too passive and atleast make her more active and more action oriented rather than dialogue driven. In which we get more thoughts and dialogue from her rather than her actually doing things that can impact the story or characters. 

@SillyWriter5 \(๑╹◡╹๑)ﾉ♬

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@SilverIce8764 It's a good story, so thanks as well