Cheeky_Leen

New wattpad seems a little werid :/

rubykairon

@Cheeky_Leen is there going to be a sequel for Caged?
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riacayubit

I hope u read this. The story "Caged" was too dark for my light soul. You should add more specific tags so ur readers would know what they're going to read. Now, to the story. As i've said dark. It saddens me that some writers tends to abuse their characters without retribution. Which is very irresponsible. The character of Ren was unstable. How could u let him become a martyr? When his character was confident and sweet, sober.  U have not justified Alvaro's abusive behavior. It was lacking in significant places. I felt like I read a chapter of a novel and that's it. U should consider reading ur stories in an audience lense for u to understand what I mean. It takes more than writing to become a writer. I hope u grow both as a writer and a person. 
          Regards,
          Ria

cannd827

Will there be a sequel to caged anytime soon?
          Some things to answer... What made Alvaro so angry? It has t to be more than being made to marry. Why did his friends missed all the signs of abuse? Alvaro said his child was miscarried but he gave him to that other guy that night.  How was he found at the bottom of the stairs? Who called for help? Hope to see more.  You'll have a hard time making a relationship between these two realistic if you choose to. Your have to show Alvaro getting done major help and he will have to also as a victim. Maybe they get supervised time initially. It would take convincing.

adapobai

Hello, fellow female otaku! :-D
          
          "I stared at Rocco for a minute, expecting the same treatment, but he had other ideas. Ideas that led him right into the bathroom where he trapped me against the sink.
          
          Gasping, I jerked back, the edge of the counter digging into my waist. "What're you-?" He pressed forward, and the hand I'd thrown up in defense landed on his broad chest..."
          
          This is an excerpt from my interracial romance, "Misery Loves Company." If you're a fan of the reverse-harem genre (think Ouran High School Host Club, Dawn of Yona, Fushigi Yugi...etc) then I think you'll enjoy my story. 

xXnotYourAveragexX

kinichiwa (^3^)!!!! I, also am a otaku. I am now following you because you love anume and yaoi⊙﹏⊙ I can tell we could get along!!!!!! who do you ship for black butler and attack in titan (if you have seen it) 
          anywayyyy to my point....... I FRIGGIN LIVE ANIME!!! AND I FRIGGIN LOVE YAOI!!! = ̄ω ̄=↖(^ω^)↗● 3●●﹏●ㄟ(≧◇≦)ㄏ

Cheeky_Leen

Hey guys, I just wanted to aplogise for my absence and future absences. I've just being really busy a lot of things have being happening so everything is just one big mess right now, preparing for uni, experiencing some issues at the moment especially with the foul mood I'm constantly stuck in which really isn't good for my mental state but whatever and to top it off my mother is very sick so as the first child I have a lot of responsibility to fufill I aplogise again and hope you guys are doing well, ama stop rambling now. Bye bye ( ^ω^)

Cheeky_Leen

It's all good, everything should be getting better soon. I've even spoken to my therapist and through things going on around I'm doing better though everyone is scared I might relapse into my depression again, hopefully not. 
            My mum is doing really well thanks for your concern *kisses*
            Thank you for this, you always make me happy with your words, you really are the best. Love you to the moon and back, hehe ( ^ω^)
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Cheeky_Leen

Constantly having people bring up the past, I hate those unwanted memories....

Cheeky_Leen

Its fine. Thank you (づ ̄ ³ ̄)づ
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Cheeky_Leen

Momiji? Those are the red leaves right? They are very pretty I used to collect them when I was younger and make stuff out of them, haha (///▽///)
            I guess but I'm just tired of being stuck at home all day, I never really get to go out and adventure, when I start university I won't be staying home but in the dorms, she's worried I'll be in the wrong crowd or something bad would happend. I just wish she would trust in me more. 
            Ahh, oke oke still need more practice then hopefully I can grasp the main bits when speaking.
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Cheeky_Leen

Ohh okay, I understand now. 
            Ah yes lets not forget about Autumn. It's always nice durning that time XD
            I hope so too, already planning to come by next year though I feel like my mum would make a trouble of me going. She doesn't like me going places on my own but hopefully she won't mind :/ 
            Are there people that speak engrish there? I know a few words and sentences in Japanese but not enough to communicate. Aomori is in Japan right? Lol
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Cheeky_Leen

Hehe, \(^o^)/
          Feel better, as healthy as a new born baby (*˘︶˘*)
          Really? Rodent it bore you?!?
          OAO....Nii-san sorry for your loss ne, I hope Nii-san is okay. Aomori? Is that a cousin?
          You sound like you had a blast then, I'm happy ヾ(*´∀`*)ノ
          Weekend boring haven't done much really, and week coming up I'm babysitting my little sister and doing my friends hair, maybe if I have time go job searching again. 
          
          Erm....Nii-san did something happen, it looks like there was a conflict over one of your stories ne. I hope all is well now :/