B. N. Carman

Hey I am writing this new book and I would like you to try it please and give me feedback on it if you don't mind.  Thank you hope you enjoy it.  

https://www.wattpad.com/story/279846009-extraordinary-friendship-and-otherworldly-love

Snowed in and need a great book that most people binge-read? Check out my book, Winter's Edge, about a hidden, underground city built by giants before the Flood over 5,000 years ago...but rediscovered in modern times outside of Denver, Colorado. It now serves as a safe haven for people with powers, hiding from ruthless government agents tasked with keeping powers a secret from the public. Seventeen-year-old Ian Sharp unwittingly ends up in Winter's Edge and falls for the only one in the city without supernatural abilities--Abby Pierce. Just as they're getting to know one another, an illusive Hunter mole begins killing citizens and devising a plan to lead the enemy right into the heart of Winter's Edge. Ian and Abby will risk everything to save the city...and each other.

Winter's Edge is an urban fantasy adventure with a love story and a bit if mystery you won't want to put down.

Having problems getting reads? Or maybe you get reads, but you need votes. Well, this week's chapter of The Art of Writing discusses the strategies for both of these issues:

How to Get Reads & Votes
https://my.w.tt/dEGJdQgPN5

Having trouble getting through a first draft or finishing a second draft? Do edits keep you bogged down in an endless cycle? Or do you just need to figure out how to end the madness and put the final draft out? Well, this week's The Art of Writing chapter is for you:

Writing Efficiently
https://my.w.tt/XIkpLMLDq5

The next chapter of The Misunderstood Hell is up. It's my story of how my life changed completely in a split second. A lot of people will probably relate to different parts of it. Technically, it's the first part of my story. I'll share the next part next week. Oddly enough, the next part will be just as interesting as the first part of my story, and probably more so. Hope you enjoy it!

Chapter 17 - My Story
https://my.w.tt/X3z8RwJqS4

The next chapter of The Misunderstood Hell is up! You've probably heard about the narrow gate and the broad gate before, but this is a new perspective on it from what we've learned in previous chapters.

The Broad Gate
https://my.w.tt/bnRmpddev4

This week's chapter of The Art of Writing is one of the most important chapters you'll read! It's all about the Show, Don't Tell skill. There's probably no skill more important than this one for storytelling and engaging your readers. Don't miss this one!


Show, Don't Tell (A Skill of the Masters)
https://my.w.tt/vptIEHmev4

The next chapter of The Misunderstood Hell is up. This week's chapter is about how all we've done was atoned for whether we accept it or not, and how an ancient ritual in the Mosaic Law displays this clearly...that all will saved in the end.

Chapter 14
https://my.w.tt/jHcY2L2Wh4

Having trouble finishing your story or getting stuck in an endless pit of editing? Then this week's chapter of The Art of Writing is for you. You'll learn how to plan out your drafts after you've started writing, as well as how to edit each draft with professional efficiency.

Planning Your Drafts and Editing for Writing Efficiency
https://my.w.tt/LvdN7ljPh4

Bonus chapter! I've just posted a new chapter I wrote this morning in The Art of Writing. It's short but has some of the most important information you could have for story structure that truly draws your readers in and makes them obsessed with your story.

Story Structure Genius
https://my.w.tt/3fQVBkM173