CarmesiStar

@GlowingRocks I just use Picasa! and add in a little typography touch haha

chocolateteapot

Hey there I've started a new story on wattpad called Tin heart, but as I'm only just starting out I am in need of major constructive criticsm. i really admire the way you are able to connect with your reader via your writig style and the way you manipulate your words and was therefore wondering if you could check out tin heart and comment some much needed feedback. I would really appreciate it, but don't worry if you don't have time.

CarmesiStar

Chapter 1, Part 2: http://www.wattpad.com/6510721-the-imaginary-chapter-1-i-got-myself-a-very-cool
          
          "That time, I was staring at it, as if enchanted by some force much complex to mankind. All of a sudden, my vision had gone blurry, and the front zoomed. I was trapped in the delusional state. I felt I was walking, but I was constant in place. As the final of the audio dripped, the world around me collapsed, like doomsday, and distorted into images of strange events."