CaidinWood

Hello my lovely followers I have started a new story and have quit all my others this is for my assignment and I am looking for advice it is called in the depths be warned the authors notes will be fairly rude only because I am not a nice person unless you follow me lol anyway please be my critique and judge the first chapter

Lumari_Midas

Hi. First off, who are you? And then who are you to come into my message board with that outlandish attitude, on a site that is meant for friendly behavior and enjoyable times? 
          
          I.e. I still don’t know where we met or why you don’t like me.

CaidinWood

Hello my lovely followers I have started a new story and have quit all my others this is for my assignment and I am looking for advice it is called in the depths be warned the authors notes will be fairly rude only because I am not a nice person unless you follow me lol anyway please be my critique and judge the first chapter