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A Review of 'Moving Mountains' by Priscilla Yiadom.
Dearest author, I have found this book interesting. The plots of each part of the story aren't the common ones. They seem so unique that I just be like, wow.
While there are beautiful plots and even beautiful names, the lack of punctuation in the write-up makes it mind-numbing. Readers will find it hard to flow alongside the story seeing that there is nothing to direct on how the conversation goes.
Also, there are things to be cleared up in the book as it may be confusing the readers. There were places you mix names up or you didn't tell the readers where the name came from. As it is a short story, clarity of the characters' details is important to avoid confusion.
In that vein, the usage of wrong grammar and vocabulary tends to hold back the information that is meant to be passed across. That needs to be worked on to clear up confusion too.
As I read through the book, I couldn't but notice that you are such a great writer. Even with the fact about lack of punctuation and all, I still learned a lot. Keep shining, dearest author. You are doing well. I hope to read more of your books.