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CHOCOrange881
Probably not a lot of people are going to see this, but I would really appreciate if people can give me critiques on my discontinued story...bc I am currently trying to make another story...and I am scared it is going to end up like my discontinued story(which has a pretty bad play..ngl) Please and thank you for the support! ~ <3