BlueRosita1523
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Hello I just read your shinobu book and it was amazing I loved it so much. I do have some ideas that you can put in the story but if you don't want any ideas that's fine but here's some.
1:One of the episodes of Naruto where him and Jiraiya are going somewhere I don't know where and Naruto was in a room and he heard a knock on the door and he opened the door and it was Itachi and someone else I can't remember but maybe you can have Ameiko come around the corner and she sees Naruto, Itachi and again the person that's with Itachi and Itachi sees her and he recognized the jacket that she's wearing because let's just say that he knows her sister maybe they want on a mission or something like that and maybe he'll like ask a question about it or saying if she's dead that's one of them. Oh and Itachi doesn't know about her clan getting killed.
2: ⚠️Spoiler for demon slayer!⚠️ if you haven't read the Manga or watch the new Demon Slayer Infinity Castle movie then I prefer you to go watch it or read the manga. In the manga shinobu sacrifice herself to kill the demon that killed her sister and maybe you can put that in the story where there's two endings one where she kills the demon (if he a demon if not then I don't know sorry) with the poison that's in her sword and have a happy ever after or sacrifice herself to kill the demon (if he is a demon) like in the manga and maybe send a talking Crow to tell team 7 and anybody else that's fighting against Obito that she's dead and you can put it wear Sasuke returns to team 7. When against the battle between Obito and hidden Leaf Village War.
3:Ameiko will tell someone that she's putting poison in her body if she's not then I don't know anyways maybe someone close to her like Naruto or somebody else that she trust and her plan to defeat that person that killed her entire Clan. Telling them not to stop her from doing what she's going to do or tell anyone.
I know that you have college and stuff and I hope that's going well ok bye
EzekielFlores922
I hope Author add the triplets, Kanao, and Aoi in the story, and maybe Inosuke too.
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BlueRosita1523
@EzekielFlores922 That means Kanao will be 16 years old when the hidden Leaf Village and Obito War like in the manga and the anime
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BlueRosita1523
@EzekielFlores922 Yeah I feel like she did because of her sister but I do want to know if Kanao is going to be there when the hidden Leaf Village and Obito War starts because I have been think what happens when Sasuke leave hidden Leaf Village and Naruto start training with Jiraiya. Ameiko meets Kanao and let's say Kanao is 13 years old and Ameiko trains Kanao for 3 years and at the war IF Ameiko dies kanao can kill Douma maybe I know the author doesn't want her to die but maybe she can make two parts where she dies and lives.
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