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I SENT YOU A FRIEND REQUESR IN DISKORD CAN WE TALK PLSSSS
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@vickeeee214 BAHAHHA Well, if it makes it any better [or worse] I considered it But nah I may make the next part soon but, it'll be rather short
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I'm sorry y'all but, Dogday cheated on Catnap!
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Just kidding! I can *confirm* he did not cheat!
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@SkullGamingStoriesWP If you're looking for the story in particular, the account that one is on is called Sunny_naps
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Space critters!
[Definitely coming to AO3, maybe here too...?]
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@thebookwacher Please stop.
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I have another high school fic idea, but i may not be able to post it here
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@Burntrapp I keep hearing about AO3 and I don't know what that is sadly. But please upload up in here!
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Hey question! This is something important that's been worrying me a bit in general, so please give an honest answer if possible; Do you feel that my fics 1. Bore you. 2. Chapters are too long?
I'm curious because I feel that my fics may not have as fun if a feel as other people's fics do due to how I write. In addition, I feel longer chapters may drive people away?
I am trying to think of ways to improve the way I write fics. One step may be slowing updates down and planning out more. [Mainly applies to longer story-based fics]
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@Burntrapp First of all your chapters are not boring! Most of the time they suck me in like a tractor beam. Second of all I'm complaining sometimes that the chapters are to short! otherwise it's art
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@vickeeee214 That's what I was thinking toooo But idk if it'd feel too out of place, especially for The Prototype to be included Maybe I'll just go the boring route and have Dogday just talk things out haha
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Okay this may sound crazy, BUT what if Dogday forced Cameron to apologize to Catnap by hurting him, but Catnap noticed his bleeding and freaked out. He wants to run, but Dogday threatens to potentially hurt, or even kill Cameron if he does
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@vickeeee214 Yeahhh that's the part that stumps me. There'd be a reason for it however, IF I include The Prototype or a similar kind of villain. The initial plan there was that Prototype would be someone with the ability to tamper with others mentally, hence causing Dogday to act violently until freed at some point. Not to mention Dogday would be completely lost afterwards. That's why the sadistic factory was there Buuut I could consider a version of the idea that doesn't involve that aspect and excludes the Prototype, but may have to happen a little later on