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@love_monkey123 it's fine you don't need to ask permission, I thought it was really cool actually

Sorry I didn't ask for your permission but You're actually the character.

@love_monkey123 I read the story, I think its really nice. A bit confusing at times, but lovely non the less. Bonus points from me because the main character has my name. :-)

Here's the thing... Um... I wrote another fanfic about bradley will Simpson because I'm stuck finding ideas with my other one so I was hoping that maybe you could read my other one? Pwease? Thanks I wove you sho much!!!

Thank you soooooomuchhhh you are amazing thank you for reading my book and I really appreciate you giving me advice. I will really use them. Thank you.   Love_monkey123

@love_monkey123 I think its a very nicestory with a wwonderful and seemingly thought out plot, however I would say that if you plan on using "..." like in chapter one I would use less of them. Also, when you do a conversation I would avoid putting "-B -A" and just write out the full conversation. Other than that I think its lovely :-)

Could you read my fanfic and tell me if it sucks?

Thank you thank you thank you!