@BringOnTheWonder
Hello my lovelies!! :) I´m sorry for my long time absence, but that is going to change soon, starting with editing/rewriting&finishing "Catch Me", and also I´m going to caryy on writing "Kiss the Rain". Hope you´ll like it :) Vote, comment, I´ll be very happy when you´ll do that! :) xoxo, B.
@BringOnTheWonder It will time but I think it will pay off. You have the potential to be on of the most amazing writers here because of your language. I'm sure you will be, too x) No problem at all! I'm just really glad you have taken it in the right spirit! :D But once again, remember, your style of writing is amazing so keep that in mind (:
@thewriter1010 I am taking all your wise advice to heart and will do as you recommended. I can see that now it will take a lot more work than I initialy thought :D ... Thank you soooo much and I really appreciate your feedback and it has not offended me in the least :D :) ... thank you again!!! :) :)
@BringOnTheWonder I really like your story. You write very well. However, there are a couple of things that would make it even more interesting. Writing longer chapters will make your stories interesting, for one. While the language is commendable, put in more description. Describe their relationship. Use more chapters. Use little incidents to reveal your character's personality instead of use one character to describe another. That makes your story interesting. Add little twists and turns because there a lot of stories like this on wattpad so you have to give people a reason to like your story better. This is my honest feedback :) I'm sorry if anything I've said has offended you!
@BringOnTheWonder No problem :D My pleasure :)
@thewriter1010 And thank you for reading my story, it´s still not finished but I appreciate you reading it :)
@BringOnTheWonder Oh okay x)
@thewriter1010 I changed it to "Catch Me" :))
@BringOnTheWonder Wait, I can't find 'The Chase' here...
@BringOnTheWonder Sure! x) Will get back to you about it in a couple of days. Will that work for you?
