Pujakumarisinha

"Let me teach you."  He held her hand from behind and aimed the gun towards the statue. Their almost whole body was touching this time and it looks like virat is hugging her from behind. A light sparked through her whole body and her heart started to pound on her chest very hard.
          
          "Just focus on your target..." she felt as if Virats voice is fanning her ear. She could even feel his breath on her neck. She tried to turn her head back and look at Virat, but he immediately turned her face forward.
          
          "Don't look at me, pay attention on your aim." Virat scolded her.
          
          'Huh? You are standing so close to me almost sticking on me, and expecting me to focus on the target?' Lucky grumbled in her mind. Her hands and feet were starting to get cold due to nervousness. Virat intertwined his fingers with her and pressed the trigger. One after another, Virat fired, and all the bullets hit the correct target this time.
          
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whoreadsss

Hey I am an anonymous author who needs an audience if you're free then please check out my story. Your comments, votes and reviews will be highly appreciated. Thankyou!
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/343847457-d-i-e-death-in-exertion
          
          If you're looking for a gripping psychological crime thriller, then "DIE" is for you. A story where twists, psychos, crime, and mystery collide.
          
          Happy reading <3

talesfromsorrow

Hey I am a debut author who needs an audience if you're free then please check out my story. Your comments, votes and reviews will be highly appreciated. Thankyou!
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/365407787?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=InkHeartedteller
          
          This is the story of childhood friends to enemies to lovers<33

icamilie

@Boo1688 thanks
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_talesofamore_

Hey there!
          
          I'm a new author, and your support would mean the world to me. It would be incredible if you could take a moment to dive into my story. Your thoughts, reviews, and votes would mean everything. 
          
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/363169319?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=_talesofamore_

Boo1688

@_talesofamore_ Hi!
            Firstly, I don't know why you need more reviews - your book is doing so great.
            Secondly, it is so well written. (I read the first chapter.) Ranveer's helplessness and desperation to be rid of the unquantifiable regret and pain he was feeling were so palpable. I felt discomfort at it down to the core of my stomach - craftfully written (no wonder, your book is doing so good)
            Thirdly, I really loved our two MCs, but the book is unfortunately around 21 hrs, and I really don't have that much time to invest in a book right now. (all I do here currently, is read my favourites or short stories.)
            
            Do text again, if you have any questions or want to know my opinion in a particular aspect
            
            Loved reading your book, albeit just the first chapter - but still.
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Divinawrts

Hey there, I got your account from a comment section of a story.
          
           I recently started writing on Wattpad. So I'm still learning. And unfortunately my social media reach is very low.  So I'm  kind of lack of genuine readers. 
          
          Will you please give my book a try. 
          
          Just try it and if you don't like it you can just leave the book. Any type of criticism will be accepted. Good or bad. 
          
          Here is the link 
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/375876259?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=share_reading&wp_page=reading&wp_uname=melodic__tales__

Boo1688

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@Divinawrts Hi! I read the first 3 chapters of your story, and in my opinion, your writing style is currently developing itself, so although the sentences were clear and legitimate, they did not provide any depth. I felt that the story lacked flow and consistency, and the characters appeared one-dimensional because of it. I can share some of my favorite reads that have simple and to-the-point language and yet hold the command and attention of the reader.
            Secondly,  I found Sarah to be absurdly innocent, bordering on stupid - I mean, how can someone wish somebody happiness when she knows he is a habitual rapist and she herself is a victim of it It just felt like a blatant insult to the intensity and lasting trauma rape leaves. (Here, I acknowledge that this is a very subjective opinion; yet, I firmly felt the need to point out that rape messes people to the very core of themselves.)
            Thirdly, I love the storyline of healing romance and justice to the perpetrator, but unfortunately, I don't read serious romance - it messes me up and keeps me up at night. However, if you ever write a fluffy rom-com, I am here for it!
            
            Do text me again, if you want to ask counter questions or need a book to improve your writing style!
            
            P.S. My writing is shit - but I have read books with spectacular language and felt as a writer -  you would definitely want to improve because currently your writing isn't at the stage that it can adopt a style of writing but rather it fundamentally needs to be more descriptive and engaging
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