Blossom_BloomScarlet

Happy Fourth of July to all the people who live in the U.S. I sometimes forget that this day exists as its just another regular day for me, and probably to many Canadians as well, so If I forget, that’s why. Lol <3

JewelSmiles

Hey, I saw your comment on my story earlier, but I couldn't find it again to reply. But yeah, I take no offense. I'm open to constructive criticism. I think I was trying to convey that, but I guess I didn't do well in that regard. When I get the next chapter up, maybe I can go back and fix some of the dialogue to make things more clear. Thanks for the suggestion. 

JewelSmiles

It's fine. I'm happy to hear from my readers on how I can improve. And btw, I will try to have the next chapter up soon. I'm finally done with my spring semester, and should be able to post more. :D
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Blossom_BloomScarlet

Hey, sorry I deleted it because my opinion had changed. My apologies, @JewelSmiles ! :)
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